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Positive(s) about the “World”
o
Metaphorical job of the park being where people
come to meet
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Negative(s) about the “World”
o
Take the whole of the beginning part out
Use a setting included a stream (stream equals loneliness)
Loneliness is communicated by the environment
Also enriching experience of shooting by a stream
Include “Voyeurism”
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Sense of detachment, but he doesn’t have purpose
– what is he doing there, before he sees the girl?
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Raise the stakes with the girl before he makes
contact with her
o
He watches her for a while, we don’t necessarily
see him in a good way, but we see the film through him
o
Comes off as a bit of a “perv” – yet we get to
know him more and understand him
o
He’s watching her, but does he go further? Does
he go nearer?
o
That’s how he’s used to dealing with people; unable
to have contact
o
He’s watching her, I’m watching him, audience is
watching me
o
Camera within a camera, (making a film about a
film?)
o
Have her do something more than drinking (an
overdose?)
o
Watch: Krzysztof Kieslowski – “A Short Film About Love”
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