Film Review Draft 2 Feedback - Key aspects to improve upon

·        Use conventional dotted lines to separate different sections of the review

·         Add a picture/snapshot of film

·         Reposition synopsis

·         Alter credits font size; make smaller (so they do not clash with font size of the actual review)

·         Make film heading largest title

·         Use more open critical language

·         Alter conclusion; replace it with final criticism of improvement points for myself

·         Reposition image (once placed)