Evaluation Questions 2 & 3 Notes to improve

Evaluation Question 3 Notes -

Describe what is being referred to in more context (too vague)
Make a point of what you learned from your audience feedback
GO INTO MORE DETAIL ON EACH POINT YOU MAKE (specifically reference the feedback you were given)
Take quotes from the research (direct reference)
Not enough concrete responses referenced from the audience themselves
Quote directly from what people say, over and over
What the audience told me (in their own words)


Evaluation Question 2 Notes -

Use more graphics (anything, like Sight & Sound logo)